Robinwyn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Incredible Man]

funny

a funny short flash, therefore not as epic or awesome as your longer flashes. didn't have much plot except being pointless (like u said). but it was still a little amusing, so its not a total loss.

fadedshadow responds:

yeah, i'm glad you reviewed, jen

[Herbert the flying Turtle]

Kaboom!

Very funny- a short but plot-filled movie. I like the voices a lot- they really seem to fit the characters. An interesting take on the classic story of the Tortoise and the Hare. Kinda reminds me of those shows like the Roadrunner and Coyote, or even the Simpson's Itchy and Scratchy, or Tom and Jerry. Well done! :)

fadedshadow responds:

wow i'm surprised i haven't replied to this. well earth-mage-2000 was the fellow who voiced all three characters in the movie and i'm quite honored to have done a movie with him. this is probably my most cherished flash. i only wish it were more well-known like my sephiroth vs silent hill flicks

[L&P: How Not to be Seen]

"hahahaha" and now for something....review-like

hehe lemmings are cute :P they're so willing to get blown up haha!

I thought it was well done, synched pretty well. simplistic. i like that.

the explosions could have been a little more creative tho- something different causes the explosion each time maybe

but other than that, i liked it :)

fadedshadow responds:

not bad for a movie made in one day

[FD06 The Frog Princess]

I'm surprised I didn't review before...

This animation wasn't really all that bad :) I do think, aside from the first lemming and pals, this one was quite creative and possibly my favorite. I'm surprised this didn't get the acclaim it deserves for being so good- I guess it's random sometimes, it seems. At any rate, I really liked this movie. It had plot- albeit very simple- and the way it was carried out was quite humorous. It was a bit short though, and very possibly could have been made a bit longer, just by adding perhaps more action or more dialogue. What, though, I'm not sure exactly. For me, a good flash is something that is crisp, clean, and smooth in all aspects. This flash nearly reached it!

Anyway, yea, this was simplistic but a good plot- for success in future flashes, I'd suggest something along the lines of this style. Get a good plot going and take it step by step. :)

Good Job!

fadedshadow responds:

thanks

[Sephiroth vs Silent Hill]

Quite very interesting

Hey! That wasn't so bad! The choices for how the monsters died were interesting. The music that was used for the flash fit quite well- spooky, too. It could have been a little longer, and had more of a plot to it, but I guess it was good for its length. It's definitely WAY better than I could even do, so I can't really complain/criticize by saying "oh, it sux" or whatever, like other people have- and, by the way, it definitely didn't suck. I think the monsters were well-drawn, based on the actual pictures of them, and I don't know if they acted the way they do in the actual Silent Hill, but that was kinda cool too.

A suggestion for next flash- create a rich plot to supplement the hilarity of the jokes and stuff you put in your flashes. This one had plenty of jokes, but a rather simplistic plot. I like the map joke, though- I can't read maps for anything. Haha.

Overall, good job! :)

fadedshadow responds:

i can develop a plot for the sequel using the events from this movie as a prelude

[Antekrist: Prologue]

Simply Brilliant!

That was amazing! Simple, yet amazing. I can't wait for the actual flash to come out. Everything just seemed to fit together well and the graphics, athough somewhat simplistic (I mean, not overly-detailed), were very good at conveying what they needed to. I love it! :)

[TANKMEN: Target Practice]

Awesome drawing

The graphics were well done on this and the synching was pretty good. It was a little short and sorta... not quite original, in my opinion. Try making something completely original, like the Lemmings was, and you're bound to get a higher score. Keep it up though, you can only get better with practice. :-)

fadedshadow responds:

thanks jenni

[CD06-TheCubicle]

Getting better!

You're getting up there! This one had plot, humor, and overall it was well composed. The beginning part was a little slow, but then it picked up in the end. If you want a good storyline, it has to keep the same pace throughout- with the occassional increased pace sometimes- so that people don't get bored. The thing is though, it can't be too slow, or people will just want to fastforward through the part. It has to be fast-paced enough that there is enough momentum to carry it through all the stages of the story until the end. This one picked up speed after a while, but when they were talking about the random things, it was too slow. I think it was the slow voices that did it. At first I couldn't understand why they were talking about what they were talking about and talking so slow, but then i realized that it was merely the smalltalk before the rest of the movie (parts summarized to reduce spoiler-age).

Next time, either shorten the conversation, or make the voices a more "normal" tone. The graphics are good, and the sound/voices were good. I like the little cameo by the lemming- that was cute.

Keep trying and one day i'm sure you'll earn a 10 from me.

fadedshadow responds:

i'll work on that, and thanks for the constructive criticism jen

[Lemming & Pals 5]

Not too shabby...

It wasn't too bad. This time for me, however, it wasn't as funny as the others. Dunno why. Sorry, dude. The graphics were still well drawn, though, and it's cool that this time their mouths move with the words. The music was good too. Good choices. Keep working. Don't give up. :-)

fadedshadow responds:

yes maam

[Mario vs Sonic (S8)]

Awesome!

Wow! That was well done! Very simplistic and clean-cut. And I was able to follow the action well. You're gettin good at this stuff. Can't wait to see more of what you can do.

fadedshadow responds:

the more i learn, the more i am amazed, lol.